Updated post after final read-through

diff --git a/content/blog/bookstack-release-v22-09.md b/content/blog/bookstack-release-v22-09.md
index ff295050b6f90bcdc341ba4f7d4155142e60b233..c581866b17d4860447b55a494f987aa87800a727 100644 (file)
--- a/content/blog/bookstack-release-v22-09.md
+++ b/content/blog/bookstack-release-v22-09.md
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 categories = ["Releases"]  tags = ["Releases"]  title = "BookStack Release v22.09"  categories = ["Releases"]  tags = ["Releases"]  title = "BookStack Release v22.09" 
-date = 2022-09-08T13:30:00Z +date = 2022-09-08T11:30:00Z 
 author = "Dan Brown"  image = "/images/blog-cover-images/sheep-mountain-luke-ellis-craven.jpg"  slug = "bookstack-release-v22-09"  author = "Dan Brown"  image = "/images/blog-cover-images/sheep-mountain-luke-ellis-craven.jpg"  slug = "bookstack-release-v22-09" 

@@ -29,20 +29,20 @@ and a bunch of tweaks & fixes.
   When you edit and save pages within the system, BookStack will now attempt to identify links   to other pages, chapters, books and shelves in the system.    When you edit and save pages within the system, BookStack will now attempt to identify links   to other pages, chapters, books and shelves in the system. 
-A new item will show when viewing one of those items, reflecting a count of pages that link +A new element will show when viewing one of those items, reflecting a count of pages that link 
 to the currently viewed item:    ![Text within a "Details" section showing "Referenced on 3 pages"](/images/2022/09/references_link.png)    to the currently viewed item:    ![Text within a "Details" section showing "Referenced on 3 pages"](/images/2022/09/references_link.png)   
-When clicked, this will take you to a new references view which lists the all pages +When clicked, this will take you to a new "References" view which lists the all pages 
 leading to the this current item:    leading to the this current item:   
-![Screenshot of a "Reference" view with a list of page items](/images/2022/09/references_view.png) +![Screenshot of a "References" view with a list of page items](/images/2022/09/references_view.png) 
   This new feature should help provide some insight to how content is interlinked within the system,     This new feature should help provide some insight to how content is interlinked within the system,  
-while also providing an indexed that we can use within BookStack's systems to make some operating more efficient. +while also providing an index that we can use within BookStack's systems to make some operations more efficient. 
    
-When upgrading an existing BookStack instance no references will be indexed until you start saving content. +When upgrading an existing BookStack instance, no references will be indexed until you start saving content. 
 To index and detect existing cross-content links, you can use the new "Regenerate References"  admin maintenance action:    To index and detect existing cross-content links, you can use the new "Regenerate References"  admin maintenance action:   

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ you can [find in our documentation here](/docs/admin/commands/#regenerate-refere
 ### Auto Link Updating    Making use of our new reference indexing system, as detailed above, BookStack will now  ### Auto Link Updating    Making use of our new reference indexing system, as detailed above, BookStack will now 
-auto-update internal page links to shelves, books, chapter and other pages when those  +auto-update internal page links to shelves, books, chapters and other pages when those  
 items experience a change in URL.    BookStack already had a system to handle some changes, it would attempt to find pages using   items experience a change in URL.    BookStack already had a system to handle some changes, it would attempt to find pages using  

@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ such links to be current. This will be done in a fully transparent manner, with
 being logged for the change with a "System auto-update of internal links" changelog message.  To support this addition, the default per-page revision limit has increased from 50 to 100 entries.    being logged for the change with a "System auto-update of internal links" changelog message.  To support this addition, the default per-page revision limit has increased from 50 to 100 entries.   
-There may still be some logical gaps that will produce old links, such as restoring old page revision,  -but this should handle most costs to ensure internal links stay current. +There may still be some logical gaps that will produce old links, such as restoring an old page revision,  +but this should handle most cases to ensure internal links stay current. 
   ### OIDC Group Sync Support      ### OIDC Group Sync Support   

@@ -92,9 +92,9 @@ This means that image file access for page images can be controlled by the page
 a whole new layer of control for environments that need it.    This new option does have some caveats, mainly that it can introduce various logical scenarios  a whole new layer of control for environments that need it.    This new option does have some caveats, mainly that it can introduce various logical scenarios 
-that cause image visibility anomalies, in cases where an images are re-used across different permissions contexts. +that cause image visibility anomalies, in cases where images are re-used across different permissions contexts. 
    
-Full details of this permission option can be found [in our docs here](/docs/admin/upload-config/#local-secure---restricted). +[Find full details of this option in our docs](/docs/admin/upload-config/#local-secure---restricted). 
   ### "Page Include Parse" Logical Theme Event      ### "Page Include Parse" Logical Theme Event   

@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ to PDF exports:
   This release of BookStack adds Romanian as an available language.   A massive thanks to Mihai Ochian (soulstorm19) on Crowdin for their amazing effort    This release of BookStack adds Romanian as an available language.   A massive thanks to Mihai Ochian (soulstorm19) on Crowdin for their amazing effort 
-of translating of 6k words in this release cycle to add this language. +of translating over 6k words in this release cycle to add this language. 
   As usual, a range of our existing languages have received updates from our terrific translators  since v22.07, so a big thanks to all listed below:    As usual, a range of our existing languages have received updates from our terrific translators  since v22.07, so a big thanks to all listed below: