Add revisioned slides for PO videos (Segment 4)

[maxcapraro]

This MR revises the slides to the PO videos:

• Contents mainly by @Silona
• Incorporated review feedback by @rrrutledge and @maxcapraro
• Used styling/layout similar to the TC slides designed by @gruetter

[maxcapraro]

I'd love to get feedback and then consensus before sending the slides out to O'Reilly.

[gruetter]

Hey Max. The slides look terrific 8P. No really - well done. I do have some comments.

• 02_primer-01_requirements:
  • s/process/processes
  • s/Have basic/Have a basic
  • s/committer'/committer and s/contributor's/contributor (as per recommendation of my buddy from the UK)
• 03_body_pr1-02_complaints
  • s/in fighting/infighting
• 04_body_pt2-01_benefits
  • Proposal: s/Open code/Code is accessible
  • Proposal: s/Planning is transparent
  • Proposal: s/Documentation is accessible
  • What are you referring to with negotiations, @maxcapraro ? With agile and InnerSource, too (IMHO), the developers have more say than in other models.
• 04_body_pt2-03-examples
  • not sure what Refactorization is ;). I'd say the modularisation is a result of the refactoring, if I understand this right. So maybe s/and/and, as a result, Also, Payments is referring to PayPal, I guess. Do we need to write that here?
  • Is there a benefit for ALM and FDI as well, or are there related metrics which have improved? If so, I propose we spell that out here.
• 06_recap_takeaways-01-wrapup
  • Proposal: s/Middle management is tough/Being a middle manager can be tough
  • s/planing/planning
• 06_recap_takeaways-02-wrapup
  • the abbreviation TC has not been used or introduced on previous slides. Proposal: s/TCs/Trusted committers
• 07_contact-01-isc
  • We're on facebook? Oh dear, the end is nigh ;)

Other than that, the slides LGTM. Thanks a bunch for putting in the work, @maxcapraro !

[maxcapraro]

Thank you @gruetter. You reviewed this like a bosch :-)

I can't take credit for the contents of the slides because they were done by @Silona (minus some changes after a review by Russ and me).

I think all of your comments make a lot of sense. I'll incorporate them directly. Regarding the questions raised, it would be great if @Silona could tap into the discussion.

[rrrutledge]

Awesome, @maxcapraro. I agree with everything from @gruetter. Also these comments.

03_body_pt1-01_difficulties-02

• This slide will have to come in a bit later than its appearance in the current video because the text that is in the bullet is spoken a few seconds later by Silona.

04_body_pt2-01-benefits-01

• Recommend "You can get other teams to help" (no additional text).

04_body_pt2-01

• Is there another slide to create for this video segment (starting at 05:47)?

06_recap_takeaways-02-wrapup-02

• Should the sub-bullets appear one-by-one?
• Need a sub-bullet for Internal marketing?

[maxcapraro]

I provided some updates. Because the diff view doesn't work well for PNG files, I summarized the changes below (using ✔️ and ⚠️ as visual support). Thanks again to both of you for the excellent and detailed review! :)

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@gruetter's review:

• 02_primer-01_requirements:
  • s/process/processes
  • s/Have basic/Have a basic
  • s/committer'/committer and s/contributor's/contributor (as per recommendation of my buddy from the UK)

✔️ Fixed

• 03_body_pr1-02_complaints
  • s/in fighting/infighting

✔️ Fixed

• 04_body_pt2-01_benefits
  • Proposal: s/Open code/Code is accessible
  • Proposal: s/Planning is transparent
  • Proposal: s/Documentation is accessible

✔️ Fixed

• What are you referring to with negotiations, @maxcapraro ? With agile and InnerSource, too (IMHO), the developers have more say than in other models.

⚠️ I pinged @Silona. For now, I just dropped it.

• 04_body_pt2-03-examples
  • not sure what Refactorization is ;). I'd say the modularisation is a result of the refactoring, if I understand this right. So maybe s/and/and, as a result, Also, Payments is referring to PayPal, I guess. Do we need to write that here?

There are multiple important remarks in your comment:

• ✔️ The term refactorization is much less common than refactoring --> Renamed it
• ⚠️ Relationship between modularization and refactoring: Many would probably agree with Georg's reading that modularization is a part of a refactoring effort. But if we stay with the (commonly used?) terminology by Martin Fowler, then I'd say refactoring (applying a series of small transformations) and modularization can very well be independent efforts --> I have a slight guts feeling to stay with "Refactoring and modularization"
• ⚠️ I watched that segment again, with that comment in mind. I think the audio/video is too light on establishing such context (Paypal context) for the viewer. I don't know how fixes could look like (other than rewriting + reshoting that).

• Is there a benefit for ALM and FDI as well, or are there related metrics which have improved? If so, I propose we spell that out here.

⚠️ No metric catched my eye. It's more a qualitative than quantitative report.

• 06_recap_takeaways-01-wrapup
  • Proposal: s/Middle management is tough/Being a middle manager can be tough
  • s/planing/planning

✔️ Fixed

• 06_recap_takeaways-02-wrapup
  • the abbreviation TC has not been used or introduced on previous slides. Proposal: s/TCs/Trusted committers

✔️ Fixed

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@rrrutledge's review:

03_body_pt1-01_difficulties-02

• This slide will have to come in a bit later than its appearance in the current video because the text that is in the bullet is spoken a few seconds later by Silona.

✔️ Fixed (added this to Screenlight)

04_body_pt2-01-benefits-01

• Recommend "You can get other teams to help" (no additional text).

✔️ Fixed. Good idea!

04_body_pt2-01

• Is there another slide to create for this video segment (starting at 05:47)?

⚠️ Yes, this is the one, where I had reached out to @Silona in Slack. With the current contents, I'd rather leave the slide out completely. I'll ask her again.

06_recap_takeaways-02-wrapup-02

• Should the sub-bullets appear one-by-one?
• Need a sub-bullet for Internal marketing?

✔️ Fixed. Seems like I only pushed some of the PNG files for the last wrap-up-slide

[maxcapraro]

⚠️ Johhnes spotted dead links in contact us slide

[maxcapraro]

⚠️ Johhnes spotted dead links in contact us slide

Changed the linkedin link and kicked out deadlink to facebook

[rrrutledge]

Everything here looks good to me.

[maxcapraro]

Thanks @rrrutledge. I'll merge this then.

[rrrutledge]

Great!