[solow] Update unfinished suggestions

[SylviaZhaooo]

Dear John @jstac,

I have addressed almost all the suggestions in issue #427. However, I would appreciate your help with the last one, which involves changing the order of two lectures.

Best regards,
Sylvia

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[jstac]

Thanks @SylviaZhaooo .

In the lectures we do not combine sentences --- see https://manual.quantecon.org/styleguide/writing.html#general-writing-advice. In particular, we never have a full stop and then continue on the same line.

How about adding this information after the bullet points?

However, I would appreciate your help with the last one, which involves changing the order of two lectures.

Please move that to a separate issue, so we can close #427

[SylviaZhaooo]

Thanks @SylviaZhaooo .

In the lectures we do not combine sentences --- see https://manual.quantecon.org/styleguide/writing.html#general-writing-advice. In particular, we never have a full stop and then continue on the same line.

How about adding this information after the bullet points?

However, I would appreciate your help with the last one, which involves changing the order of two lectures.

Please move that to a separate issue, so we can close #427

Thanks @jstac.

The purpose of saying, "However, I would appreciate your help with the last one, which involves changing the order of two lectures" refers to the last suggestion I want you to check in the last suggestion in issue #427. I think it is a misunderstanding due to my expression, sorry about that. And for the writing style thing, I will be going through the webpage you mentioned. If nothing else is wrong, this pr can be closed.

[mmcky]

@SylviaZhaooo I can change the order of the two lectures in a separate PR. Let's not incorporate that here.

[mmcky]

@SylviaZhaooo I have moved the double sentence to a new line that should appear below the dot points. Once the preview has deployed -- please check it looks good and makes sense.

[SylviaZhaooo]

Thanks @mmcky, I will check it.

[SylviaZhaooo]

@SylviaZhaooo I can change the order of the two lectures in a separate PR. Let's not incorporate that here.

I see, thanks @mmcky.

[mmcky]

thanks @SylviaZhaooo